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Posted by Esmerelda on February 27, 2010 - 21:21

I still write
but nobody sees it
I still write
But it’s just for me
Or for the future
Or for something
I haven’t thought of yet

Because I don’t want
Your thoughts
Or your judgements
Or your bullshit opinions

Because just for once
I’m keeping something in.

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Comments

Beeme | February 27, 2010 - 21:29

Very powerful, I could relate.

"Because I don’t want
Your thoughts
Or your judgements
Or your bullshit opinions

Because just for once
I’m keeping something in."

Beeme xx

Esmerelda | February 27, 2010 - 21:34

Cheers - and it's kind of ironic I'm posting it on here, right? ;)

Beeme | February 27, 2010 - 23:15

yeaaah ;) but I swear I've felt like this before..

Bradene | February 28, 2010 - 17:46

I knew this feeling well when I was younger, My ex used to make fun of me for writing, but I stuck at it and won out in the end. A powerful little piece to be proud of. Val x