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from the ABC set

I met him once;
the king under the mountain,
hiding in dark
shadows. I could not discern
a troll, or a red beard or
even Pendragon’s tattoo;

but he was king
and lived under the mountain.
Other figures -
outlines on the limestone walls -
were clear; Darby arguing
his way out of the kingdom.

A jaunty flute
under a jester’s hat and
rodent shadows.
Boys: Baldur mute and prone,
one with a lyre, one
with string, paying it out

and reeling it
in. Observing his shadow
playthings the King
repeated the riddles and
tricks to keep the dead
forever under the rock.

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Comments

Sooz006 | February 11, 2008 - 17:07

I read this one through twice because it evoked a strange emotion in me. It's dark, deathly and menacing ...If it was a colour it would be charcoal or black, at the very least dark indigo ... and yet I wanted to read it as yellow. Does that make any sense or does it just sound stupid? It's the best way I can describe it. It's a deep,disturbing poem and I don't know if it's the cleverness of your writing, but it just had a very light feel to it. Lovely work.