Lovetide


from the ABC set Lovers, Liars and Just Good Friends.

You said it was like the sea coming to the shore,
the last wave overwhelmed by just one more,
the water boils with jealousy unjust
until fear cools it - as it must.
Sadness laps our hearts, anger roils over despair
but before foaming hate submerges us, take care;
be patient, wait! Ensure the count is seven -
that wave comes, and we are in heaven.

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Comments

jennifer | March 18, 2009 - 12:57

Like a lullaby, soothing and sad...and so true, the ebb and fall...I'll remember to count to seven next time!

J x

threeleafshamrock | March 19, 2009 - 12:41

Great use of imagery; and true, so true! Nice one!

Chris

littleditty | March 20, 2009 - 20:15

that's a lovely poem, enjoyed :)