Here's to you a published poet!
I toast your fortune with my glass.
It's whisky, not champagne - and
the sliver in my heart
is an iceberg.
It only melts in the guilty heat
of schadenfreude, when I hear
of your submission spiked
by an editor-
doubtless one of dubious taste.
But you know this,
a writer to your jealous bones-
your inside-out skin
burned by every terse rejection.
No wonder you drink.

Comments
Stefano | October 15, 2008 - 17:44
Screw 'em ... hic ... thad's wad I say. Screw 'em. Did I ever tell you you're my bestest poet in the whole wide wossname? What were we talking about? Oh yeah. Screw 'em.
chuck | October 15, 2008 - 17:48
Bloody right Stefano. Good voice. Who's round is it?
artisus | October 15, 2008 - 17:52
very clever write, strong last line. Perhaps the strongest today.
Silver Spun Sand | October 16, 2008 - 10:01
Nice one, Ewan. More power to your pen:-)
Tina