Mean Spirits


from the ABC set The Long and the Short of It...

Here's to you a published poet!
I toast your fortune with my glass.

It's whisky, not champagne - and
the sliver in my heart
is an iceberg.
It only melts in the guilty heat
of schadenfreude, when I hear
of your submission spiked
by an editor-
doubtless one of dubious taste.

But you know this,
a writer to your jealous bones-
your inside-out skin
burned by every terse rejection.

No wonder you drink.

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Comments

Stefano | October 15, 2008 - 17:44

Screw 'em ... hic ... thad's wad I say. Screw 'em. Did I ever tell you you're my bestest poet in the whole wide wossname? What were we talking about? Oh yeah. Screw 'em.

chuck | October 15, 2008 - 17:48

Bloody right Stefano. Good voice. Who's round is it?

artisus | October 15, 2008 - 17:52

very clever write, strong last line. Perhaps the strongest today.

Silver Spun Sand | October 16, 2008 - 10:01

Nice one, Ewan. More power to your pen:-)

Tina