Muhammad Dali

No other title could possibly do.

Great! Filled me with dyslexia. ;)

Funny, surreal and very enjoyable.

Heartiest congratulations for a well deserved cherry.I thoroughly enjoyed reading it.

It is just my humble openion, but If you change

Float like a butterknife,
sting like a tree:

To

Float like a butterknife,
sting like an acacia tree:

It will improve the metre of this poem.

Well, I take your point about the metre of the poem; however if I were going to work on it further I would change the last line.

Changing the second in the manner you suggest would take it too far from Muhammed Ali's original:

'Float like a butterfly, sting like a bee': his own description of his style of boxing.

regards
Ewan

Oh, I see. I had forgotton Muhammed Ali's original:

'Float like a butterfly, sting like a bee':

In that context, your version is better.

Best regards.
aqk