Talk To Me


from the ABC set Lovers, Liars and Just Good Friends.

You marvel at my self-control
in public, dangerous places.
I preserve a simple status quo
in the presence of unfriendly faces.
I pour my heart on the virtual page,
you reply in terse commonplaces.
We'll meet, when we can,
and my heart will run such races,
and you'll hold me, back, with a look so black
that any love will be faint, just traces.

What is it that I can say to you,
so you don't look for meaning in spaces?
What is there that I can simply do,
before our love comes down to cases?
I miss you, I want you, I love you,
what else can I write that replaces
the feelings you know, that I'll always have,
for all time, for those embraces.

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Comments

chuck | October 4, 2009 - 14:39

Looks like the writer's dilemma....always editing.

Ewan | October 4, 2009 - 14:41

That's all too true... and you can talk! :-)

chuck | October 4, 2009 - 14:45

Please don't mock the afflicted. :)

Ewan | October 4, 2009 - 14:46

that was a straight in the box one, Chuck, so I've let myself off.

Ewan.

chuck | October 4, 2009 - 15:45

The real thing! I believe you...but will she?

FTSE100 | October 4, 2009 - 17:33

This sounds like W S Gilbert. I can see it being performed in costume. I'd better go before I start hearing it...

Miss_D_Meaner | October 4, 2009 - 19:47

It's good. I like the title of the collection too....

Cavalcaderl | October 4, 2009 - 22:17

New Ewan
This is good especially the way it flows.
The Funeral is over now after the great shock ok.
julie x (:-
maybe read "Togetherness"