"I need to tell you
That I love you".
Yes that may be true,
But how so that a man a such
like a girl as her to you?
"No words explain it"
No, don't buy it
But prove her, that you do
You love her? Well get up
And stop vid-gaming as you drew
................................
Care 'bout them people
Never met in wholesome
Break hearts, time passes by
Then death comes to lonesome
Written in the grave
GAME OVER, raved
No extra lives on allaby
His avatar stands, saved
by Francis Arevalo
Comments
jennifer gentle | August 27, 2010 - 16:29
I like the rhymes and the directness. And 'GAME OVER' is good.
The lines
'But how so ...
... a girl such as you' are not very clear in meaning but the feeling is there.
kuno-chan | August 30, 2010 - 07:27
i love the poem. i am surrounded by gamers in my life and i know its true.
----Kuno-Chan----