You won't believe this: the angels think the shopping centre is a sacred place. I don't know what to say. Sacred places have trees, we all know that. They might have water too. Maybe mountains. Certainly nature will be involved. If there are any buildings at all, and it's questionable whether they are allowed, they should be full of magical artefacts, shrines, pictures of people flying into the sky and so forth.
The angels say that's only true because of the way people's minds work. Angel minds work differently. In the shopping centre they see the work of God's people and so sense the presence of God. Trees and dirt are not very interesting to them at all. I advised them to keep quiet about it. They aren't going to make any friends by saying things like that.
This should really be split into lots of short lines and called a poem since it isn't very long.

Comments
RachelPatricia | October 1, 2011 - 14:07
I think it's great as it is, Skunk ;)
Very much enjoyed. Next time I'm out shopping I'll make sure to keep my eyes peeled!
Rachel xx