They will forgive them everything,
remembering the taste of iron rot,
arms arched over the bonnet,
defensively. Dandelions growing
out of petrol caps telling us
that nothing so sculptured
would ever come of that.
Bulbs’ fangs puncture the tires,
thread veins, coil round the wipers
asphyxiating the windscreen
as if this browning Volts Wagon
had never belonged to asphalt.
They knew, always had, that
it would come back, shapeless,
battered. Morning glory trumpeting
its return. They mock its solubility,
dissolving our fickle inventions.
Brambles masking the outdoor toilet
to make it seem that we were always
civilised, always delicate, refined.
They even hid, with thorns
the oafish snores, years of dribble,
of a comatose princess who was only
ladylike when she was flat, asleep.

Comments
camilla | January 25, 2008 - 23:03
Not sure who "they" are but this is quite possibly me being thick as I am rather tired.I think the title could be better and I don't think "lay flat" in the last line is correct .
I'm only being mean because there are some really fab images in it.All the plant life taking over,the dissolving of man made objects ,and the comatose princess dribbling. This is of course just what sleeping people really do.
HaiAnh | January 26, 2008 - 23:24
No you not being mean at all. I welcome all feedback. The title was one I liked and I strung it onto this poem afterwords, so it is good of you to pick up on that, I too think it could benefit from a better suited title. What about just 'flat' for the last line? I'll keep toying with it. Thank you for your comment.