Summer haikus

Posted by HaiAnh on July 26, 2008 - 16:54
from the ABC set Safety goggles must be worn at all times

the grass is teasing
the paddling pool has taken
its first victim, just

burdened with the weight
of an abandoned bird bath
the cherub’s backaches

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Comments

I really, really loved this. It was beautifull and I really got the feel of summer

I have tried writing haikus, but found it too hard, because I always try to get too many words in.

xxx

It's great discipline though.