Reflection.


from the ABC set Poems 1

This is my special day.

I’ve planned it for ever,
and a bit more.

An early start.

I want to depart,
before the house awakes.

I look down at the water.

It swirls and dances,
as the vessel fills.

Absorption of a picture,
on a liquid canvas.

I can’t help but stare.

Is that really me?

“Hello,” I say,
Curiously.

He doesn’t answer;
just stares.

Now I’m staring,
At him,
staring,
at me.

I reach down and scoop a mass of water,
launching it into my face.

It delights my skin like a cold knife.

I savour the moment.

If only my life,
could have been this…
refreshing.

The car is filling quickly now.

It will soon be over.

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Comments

Hal 9000 | June 18, 2010 - 18:32

Thanks ABC for the Cherry. This one is special to me. It was nurtured with love and attention.

Luly Whisper | June 19, 2010 - 22:21

Well written.

Hal 9000 | June 20, 2010 - 13:15

Thanks Luly.

Nolan | June 20, 2010 - 19:15

"This is my special day.

I’ve planned it for ever,
and a bit more.

An early start."

Hoped it was your wedding but nice poem nevertheless!
Nolan cheers!