This is my special day.
I’ve planned it for ever,
and a bit more.
An early start.
I want to depart,
before the house awakes.
I look down at the water.
It swirls and dances,
as the vessel fills.
Absorption of a picture,
on a liquid canvas.
I can’t help but stare.
Is that really me?
“Hello,” I say,
Curiously.
He doesn’t answer;
just stares.
Now I’m staring,
At him,
staring,
at me.
I reach down and scoop a mass of water,
launching it into my face.
It delights my skin like a cold knife.
I savour the moment.
If only my life,
could have been this…
refreshing.
The car is filling quickly now.
It will soon be over.

Comments
Hal 9000 | June 18, 2010 - 18:32
Thanks ABC for the Cherry. This one is special to me. It was nurtured with love and attention.
Luly Whisper | June 19, 2010 - 22:21
Well written.
Hal 9000 | June 20, 2010 - 13:15
Thanks Luly.
Nolan | June 20, 2010 - 19:15
"This is my special day.
I’ve planned it for ever,
and a bit more.
An early start."
Hoped it was your wedding but nice poem nevertheless!
Nolan cheers!