Her wishes and ashes
Took me to Newcastle
Cheap Bed and Breakfast
Opposite Westgate Bowling
Hadrian’s wall glimpsed
Between Sari and betting shops?
Over the hilltops
As green as fresh coriander
The white walls of Baltic...
“Is that the Get Carter car-park?”
We took a bus out to Ouseland
For an ale near Jesmond.
Old boys amongst students
Called up like my granddad
Could have brushed jackets with him
Back in the day
Coughing from volcano ash
Rather than coal dust
Our taxi passes the ruins
Of the Brown Ale factory
The walls are as thin as
The paper I write on
I hear you through them
Speaking to him

Comments
Louise178 | August 18, 2010 - 06:30
I love some of the lines in this, her wishes and ashes, ...as green as fresh coriander, lovely.
harveyjoseph | August 18, 2010 - 13:53
Thanks very much Lousie. Glad you liked it.
shoe | August 18, 2010 - 15:22
Very poignant and some lovely lines, The two line structure works beautifully.
harveyjoseph | August 18, 2010 - 17:26
Cheers shoe. Appreciate the comments.