To you, my love,
I ask:
Will you forever
Stay?
To you, my heart,
I ask:
Will you forever
Hold?
To you, my sense,
I ask:
Will you forever
Wait?
To you, my love,
I ask:
Will you forever
Stay?
To you, my eyes,
I ask:
Will you forever
Want?
To you, my breath,
I ask:
Will you forever
Be?
To you, my love,
I ask:
Will you forever
Stay?

Comments
Mangone | June 9, 2010 - 07:52
I like this.
Yet consider...
"To you, my eyes, I ask: Will you forever Want?"
You may find that it is you who wants and the eyes simply feed the want.
hellbent-savage | June 9, 2010 - 09:32
thnx for d comment...
i'm glad you liked it ..