To you, my love.

To you, my love,
I ask:
Will you forever

Stay?

To you, my heart,
I ask:
Will you forever

Hold?

To you, my sense,
I ask:
Will you forever

Wait?

To you, my love,
I ask:
Will you forever

Stay?

To you, my eyes,
I ask:
Will you forever

Want?

To you, my breath,
I ask:
Will you forever

Be?

To you, my love,
I ask:
Will you forever

Stay?

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Comments

Mangone | June 9, 2010 - 07:52

I like this.

Yet consider...
"To you, my eyes, I ask: Will you forever Want?"
You may find that it is you who wants and the eyes simply feed the want.

hellbent-savage | June 9, 2010 - 09:32

thnx for d comment...
i'm glad you liked it ..