Holding his nose against the foul stench, he stood staring at the seething bubbling cess pool, wondering how to get past it so he could join his wonderful sweet love, Betty, without getting his expensive snakeskin boots covered in grime.
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insertponceyfre... | July 29, 2011 - 17:45
that is fantastically rubbish Pia - well done!
Highhat | July 29, 2011 - 17:45
Wow thanks that was a quicky- ha ha;D
Kahdai | July 29, 2011 - 18:12
aah no! I get it now what to do thanks pia and well done with your IP
Highhat | July 29, 2011 - 18:25
That's good Kahdai- you go for it-
Silver Spun Sand | July 29, 2011 - 18:34
Absolutely fabulous, Pia;-) Inspired, I'd say.
Tina;-)
Highhat | July 29, 2011 - 18:46
Thanks I'm still laughing because of the others entries and yours Tina
;)Pia
barryj1 | July 29, 2011 - 22:17
Wow! And what's with the snakeskin boots?
Highhat | July 30, 2011 - 05:08
I'm not sure Barry- just popped up in my mind! Haha thanks for reading
;)Pia
celticman | July 30, 2011 - 18:05
Yes I can see you've spent a lot of time, at least ten seconds, or more, on this. Well done.
Highhat | July 31, 2011 - 04:41
It's really easy for me to write something bad you know Celtic. Writing something good is the hard part.
he he
;)Pia
skinner_jennifer | August 1, 2011 - 10:06
Hi Pia,
great work Pia, I could almost smell that cess pool.
Poo!
Jenny.
Highhat | August 1, 2011 - 18:53
yeah it was awful wasn't it? Thanks Jenn ;D
;)Pia
Overthetop1 | August 2, 2011 - 08:00
Really great stuff Pia & congrats on a cherry. I do hope this piece is not autobiographical.
Richard L. Prov... | August 2, 2011 - 13:11
A good 'Yacky' poem. Richard LP
Highhat | August 2, 2011 - 18:15
I'd say Yucky Richard-
;)Pia
Highhat | August 2, 2011 - 18:16
Well I was wondering why my snakeskin boots had disappeared- ha ha OTT
;)Pia