Solemnity

Oeh, such delightful imagery. The way you string words together is truly unique Pia!

Gee thank you so much Maggy-praise from you means so much as I truly admire your abilities as a poet. You have really made my day.

;)Pia

Hi Pia,

I think this is brilliant, should definitely get
some cherries.

There is so much description, I feel the need to
write it down myself, hope you don't mind.

I heard the whoosh and saw the sprinkle
of these watery tears
As the frail seaweed
Was pulled from beneath my fears

I saw the swivelling ochre ache
In these paltry sobs
As the autumn leaves came crashing down
beside all my heartthrobs

I felt the honey trickle
Down this naked insomnia
As the vixen's afterbirth
covered all my trivia

As I said before, this is brilliant.

Thanks for sharing.

Jenny.

Thank you Jenny. Your comment is much more worth than the cherries- so Thank you so much.I'm really glad you enjoyed this one. I liked writing it!

;)Pia

Wonderful writing, Pia:-) I agree with Jenny.

Tina;-)

I felt the honey trickle
Down this naked insomnia

- gorgeously inspiring, Pia! I love it when you read a poem and lines from it pleasantly haunt you for ages afterwards, and these surely will. Loved it :)

Rachel xx

Thanks Tina and Rachel. Glad you enjoyed.

;)Pia