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All the tomorrows

Posted by Highhat on September 17, 2011 - 18:16

Ahead of the moment
constantly shifting between all the
once upon a times.
Fairies and angels will n’er replace
your reverie of the
leaves swirling about ,
between the highs and lows.

With spineless thoughts,
You are drowning in shadows,
surrendering time and time again.
Not tempted by tangibility
you seek redemption and relief
in deep seas.
Your nightmare is weakness,
also tomorrow.

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Comments

Silver Spun Sand | September 17, 2011 - 18:25

This is beautiful, Pia.

I can't pick out a favourite line or lines, they are all equally memorable, but I guess, if I was pushed it would be these:-

"Fairies and angels will n’er replace
your reverie of the
leaves swirling about ,
between the highs and lows"

Great stuff;-)

Tina

Highhat | September 17, 2011 - 18:29

Well I never thought of it as beautiful Tina but that is a very encouraging comment. Thank you ever so much. I'm so glad you even could pick out a favourite few lines.
hope you have a peaceful evening and Sunday.
;)Pia

Beeme | September 17, 2011 - 18:59

I love this pia, it is so moving.

Beeme xx

Highhat | September 17, 2011 - 19:03

Thanks Beeme- glad you enjoyed it hope you have a great evening Tuesday- best of reading luck..

;)Pia

Beeme | September 17, 2011 - 19:09

Thank you I'll probably need it I'm so nervous! :)

skinner_jennifer | September 18, 2011 - 12:18

This is very descriptive Pia,
I too thought those lines that Tina mentioned, were
very inspiring.

Jenny.

Highhat | September 18, 2011 - 12:39

Thank you very much Jenny for reading and your kind comment

;)Pia

fatboy74 | September 18, 2011 - 22:28

small but lovely pia :-)

Highhat | September 19, 2011 - 19:50

Thanks FB- glad you enjoyed

;)Pia

Cavalcaderl | September 19, 2011 - 20:26

new Highhat
Hello! Good way of expressing
all what you have mentioned in
this unfolding poem. Twirling leaves.etc;
Thanks.
Have a good day.
julie xx

Highhat | September 20, 2011 - 06:56

Thanks for reading Julie- you have a good day too

;)Pia