perfect imperfections.

I am a flower with missing petals, my steam bent and leaves a color of grace and delight. I am beauitful, yet ugly as my flaws seek a beauty they don't have. Failing to reach the perfection I have within. My steam is bent but I stand talk. Not all my petals are in place, yet I cry out with a joy that only the sky above can protray. I wave and shimmer with perfect imperfections. I am a flower with missing petals.

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Comments

insertponceyfre... | June 20, 2010 - 11:23

hello Iamber, I like this piece. You have a few typos:

steam - you mean stem?

portray

my stem is bent but I stand tall

Auntie-Ann | June 20, 2010 - 13:43

Thought provoking, I like it :-)

maggyvaneijk | June 22, 2010 - 12:38

If you fix the typos this piece will be perfect, very delicate imagery.

Iamber. | August 24, 2010 - 22:27

I was typing on my Ipod while writing this, thank you for pointing this out. :) <3I'amber.