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Angelic Wings

Posted by Ilovewriting99 on January 11, 2012 - 22:52

Screams
Dreams
And broken angel wings
The screams of the broken
They awaken the unwoken
The dreams of the dreamers
Wishing only to be succeeders
The wings of the angelic
Turn all psychedelic
The screamers
The dreamers
Even the strongest of believers
Destroy the wings
The destruction stings
And all that it brings
Are dead, broken angelic wings

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Comments

lyssagurl_l0l | January 12, 2012 - 02:50

This is beautiful :)

~:)alyssa(:~

skinner_jennifer | January 12, 2012 - 09:53

I loved this poem.

Jenny.

jolono | January 12, 2012 - 12:32

Agree with all of the above. It flows really well. I found myself reading it aloud and that made it even better!

Cavalcaderl | January 12, 2012 - 12:50

New cavalderl
Really enjoyed this poem,
liked the flow of it all.
I too read it to myself.
How can I be an angel?
julie

Ilovewriting99 | January 13, 2012 - 00:19

Thank you everyone!!(: