a speckled stone
round as the moon
is balanced
on the temple gate
under that tree
lies the man who placed it there
centuries ago
silently he awaits its fall -
his final act upon the earth
a speckled stone
round as the moon
is balanced
on the temple gate
under that tree
lies the man who placed it there
centuries ago
silently he awaits its fall -
his final act upon the earth
Comments
Silver Spun Sand | January 20, 2010 - 12:34
Beautiful in its seeming simplicity.
Tina
Dynamaso | January 21, 2010 - 00:42
This has such a beautiful, calming and medative quality about it, like a chinese brush painting.
Cavalcaderl | January 23, 2010 - 10:22
new Belle Green
Really nice,but can mean many things
can't it. well thought out.Spiritual
I would say "Temple Gate"
julie x cavalcader (:-
De La Alex | January 24, 2010 - 19:33
Very nice; simple and pleasing!
staticshakedown | September 20, 2010 - 15:24
That guy who laid the stone seems very mischievous ~
Great poem, glad it got a cherry :]
inchiki | September 21, 2010 - 04:43
thanks for your comments everyone.