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Holes in the bag

Posted by IsntLifeBrilliant on October 7, 2010 - 23:33
from the ABC set Poetry

The ‘not quite water’
enters the water,
making the water
less like water.

The things in the water
die in the water
as the ‘not quite water’
usurps the water.

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Comments

Highhat | October 8, 2010 - 12:00

I think this about contamination, isn't it? Very good with the repetition.

IsntLifeBrilliant | October 7, 2011 - 00:23

Thank you, I have always been happy with this one. It is rather old.