The clouds of this starless night cloak thought,
Obscure the tread of tireless pacing among dreams,
In the sun of meagre spacing, of buildings
Traced against the skyline, the mind reaches
A momentary peace, a fossilization of emotion,
While you in the far flung twinkling of Sirius appear.
To the shoreline racing seagulls, you motor through
This night, a tide of trembling feeling envelops
The senses, a glacial erosion creates a carving
In your country, hollows out a space where I once was,
Bringing a freedom, a lowland exposure yearned for,
And the stratosphere crouches, waiting to be filled.

Comments
SundaysChild | May 17, 2009 - 17:15
I really liked:
'The clouds of this starless night cloak thought,
Obscure the tread of tireless pacing among dreams,'
Beautiful.
Very much enjoyed.
Dynamaso | May 19, 2009 - 00:01
Came back to read this after reading your second in the series. This has the same urgent power, the ferociousness SundaysChild mentioned. Very good work indeed.