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Seriously ... I have always had a 'thing' about those little glass, glittery globes. They have always fascinated me.

Your poem sums up the sight, perfectly.

T x

Hmm... I never saw anything like what Jen describes in one of those globes... did it come from Amsterdam?

(I liked this one Jen.)

Ewan

'Love like snowstorms
Caught in glass globes,
You blow circles, dizzying'

- Loved the imagery of the first stanza! Such a compact poem that says so much ;) Well done!

Magic xxx

Haha, Ewan, no, just two different images that sum up the dizzy, disorientating nature of love and sex...

Thanks for the comments, folks! 30 words seems so small, now I'm writing whole chapters of my 'novel' hahaha!

J x

In fact, Ewan, I think it probably came from Geleen Straat, in den Haag:-)

That's the lovely thing about life - there are are many ways of looking at things. Now, I'm dizzy ... and I'm going to bed.

T X

Excellent imagery - slightly-wicked but very good. I like it.

You buck and twist as
I grip your golden pole,
Yes, I think I see where you're coming from LOL. Great piece, well done and well deserving of the cherry!

Chris XX

P.S. Now get back to the story! ;)

simple, effective, lovely and arousing...all in this little package. amazing. congrats on the cherry

jason

I agree with everyone else. This is a very effective poem. Well done.

Nathan.

Beautiful little poem, packed full of very vivid imagery - erotic and beautifully told. Excellent. Maria x