Divided Ground


from the ABC set Forbidden Fruit 2010

Divided Ground (6th July, 2010)

United we sit, to observers visually sound;
Divided we will fall on this unsteady ground.
You’re rising up, loud and proud, to make a stand,
All other voices muted; we raise our hands,
Speak fast as light splits, refracted by the glass:
These are the things we air outside of class.
Echoes of the past infiltrate; I hesitate to speak;
As the embarrassment creeps, he peace-makes.

Can I watch the time tick by and keep quiet?
There’s no room to hide, I can’t put out this fire.
And the room starts to dissolve around us all:
Quicksand words slip; like liquid gold, the tears fall
From bruised, tired eyes. You’re unrehearsed,
Widening this divide; you’re making it worse.
Where once lay a gap, a chasm has emerged
And I can only express my regret with these words.

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Comments

MistakenMagic | July 7, 2010 - 17:24

Really like the structure of this one, Jen. And the images in these lines are just wonderful:

'Quicksand words slip; like liquid gold, the tears fall
From bruised, tired eyes. You’re unrehearsed,
Widening this divide; you’re making it worse.'

Well done!

Magic xxx

Cavalcaderl | July 17, 2010 - 20:55

new Jennifer
yes,I like it all,
same as MistakenMagic says.
good hear from you
julie

jennifer | July 17, 2010 - 20:59

Thank you, folks, I don't think you'll be getting any more poems from me for a while; I seem to magically have become unblocked and am writing the sequel to Unbelievable now!

Check out Chapter 20 of Unbelievable, now posted. I think there are 34 in total, and I'm now on Chapter 3 of the sequel, Unforgivable.

J x