Echoes

Back with a bang Jen. Good to see/read you again. To many good lines here to separate but love the last stanza particularly; maybe for the truth therein contained.

Chris XX

It's great to have you back Jen ;) There's some wonderful images here, I love:

'Do the minutes yawn like dogs
as distance slips and slides?'

and

'My body still seeks your bends,
she will not be ruled;'

oh and

'we mistook our lust for love,
tried to fit like broken halves,'

Hope we'll see more poetry from you soon!

Magic xxx

I have so missed you poetry, Jennifer and was pleased when I saw this posted today.

"I wake and punctuate the night
with the whispers of screams;

is it the years that stretch to fill
the chasms carved by time?"

... My favourite lines.

Tina X

New Hi!
Jennifer lovely to hear from you.
This is great all of it the verse me
same as Mistakenmagic
.
Is it the years that stretch to fill
the chasms carved by time?
Do the minutes yawn like dogs
as distance slips and slides.
Great. left mess; to you and thanks
re: altering one mine you mentioned now done
"Silence Is Golden"!
what glam photo wow1 blonde!
julie x (:-

Hi Julie,

Thank you so much for your kind comments! Glad you like my new pic - I occasionally scrub up well! Those are my favourite lines too, I'm glad you picked them out!

J x

Your metaphors are very interesting. Very interesting indeed, and, I especially liked the line "with hands,revered,reviled;".

Two R-words in the same line. Nice!

Sophia Grace