Inspiration Point


from the ABC set Rebirth (Spring 2008)

Inspiration Point (30th May 2008, 12.58am)

It's spring and the sudden rains and blossoming sun make the earth come alive once more...

From earth, I emerge,
raise my shiny new head,
take the mud in my mouth,
chew once, spit it out;
water stains my eyes with clarity,
sun pierces my conscience with startling colour;
I spring up, strong, well-fed
from the earth which feeds,
from the earth which seeps
into my veins like drugs,
pure love.
From earth I come,
spurting my shoots into your plot,
making you proud;
Mother, you made the ground
in which I make my bed;
soon,
you will reap what you sowed
and I’ll be dead.

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Comments

Doeslittle | May 30, 2008 - 00:07

This is great and I know I always have a but..but I think 'green is the overwhelming theme' sits uneasily in this and the line of 'from the earth that bleeds'. We've had the 'bleed' conversation before so I know what you'll say. I personally would edit those two lines out for perfection, but I think it's very good all the same.

jennifer | May 30, 2008 - 00:12

I begin to worry that I am rather obsessed with this bleeding thing, and now I'm off to reassess my troubled psyche...!

jennifer | May 30, 2008 - 00:13

Howzat?!