The Last Summer Night


from the ABC set Summer Night City (Summer 2008)

The Last Summer Night (6th June 2008, 9.17am)

This is the Last Summer Night
that I will spend dancing in tents under stars
flooded with the scent of crushed grass,
cider-laden breath and empty bottled glass;
outside, darkness falls like a soft snowfall,
dampening down the world with dewfall
as the songs end and the crowd call out for
yet one more encore from the tired band;
I clutch my plastic cup in happy hands
as beside the people I love best I stand,
swaying in the noise and smoke that drifts
from sneaky cigarettes that give magic lifts,
and the boy who hopes his talk will charm a kiss;
if only every day I spent ended with such laughter
as, with a flourish, the crowd-charming master
returns to the stage for a final song played faster
than we can move our rooted feet to the beat,
as underneath the canvas we sing along to seek
a sweet escape from mundane Thursday eve;
this is the Last Summer Night that I will spend
dressed in baggy jeans with muddied hems;
from the past, I pluck and wear like gems
strung around my neck the nights we spent
like this, youth hanging from us like snakeskin
halfway cast; the lack of care is wearing thin,
and the beat that emanates from deep within
begins to cease to match the tune that echoes
round the flapping walls; suspended in the throes
of applause, I raise my arms and whistle low
and long, saluting the Last Summer Song
that I will listen to; for me, the time has gone
for revelling and making free; I will bid so long
to all of this; the Last Summer Night.

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Comments

Alaw | June 6, 2008 - 08:45

There are some really lovely images here and parts that flow well.

tcook | June 6, 2008 - 12:51

Don't bid farewll to it - it's too precious - you just move on to other festivals where older people go!

sunshine | June 6, 2008 - 13:11

....or carry on attending and see things from another perspective. Meanwhile whatever feelings or thoughts prompt you to write - well maybe that's cause for celebration.

Dynamaso | June 7, 2008 - 01:43

You have so captured the magic of festivals in this and had me remembering all those wonderful days and nights I spent at festivals myself.

animan | June 8, 2008 - 23:28

Yes, this does get over that festival feel powerfully - not that I ever managed to experience it very successfuly myself, however hard I might have tried! There is some mesmerisingly fine language here and I feel that part of the whole effect is achieved by the way the poem drifts out and into rhyme and half-rhyme - I particularly liked 'drifts ... lifts ... kiss' - don't know why exactly - just kind of did.

jennifer | June 9, 2008 - 12:41

Thank you for your comments, folks! I have no intention of giving up on festivals, it was just such a perfect evening that I wanted it to last forever and in a way, yes, be The Last Summer Night! How melancholy of me!

Animan - you offer high praise! The rhymes and half-rhymes drifting is how my poetry, and sometimes my prose, comes. I am glad you enjoyed reading it; I certianly enjoyed writing it!