Slip Skin


from the ABC set Disturbing Dreams (Summer 2008)

Slip skin (17th September, 2008, 1.15pm)

I sharpen the carving knife,
poise it above another life,
make the first incision,
and with the first blood drawn
comes the knowledge that
I have made the right decision;
a mask for the masquerade,
new clothes for the parade,
and who I was shall be invisible
as I model my new vision.
Peel back the requisite layers;
undress the pair of us inch by inch;
one quiet, dumb, limp; one wincing;
then the moment of revelation
in which I become hidden;
slip skin on like a glove
and hide in the softness
of somebody else’s prison.

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Comments

Nathan Bednarek | September 17, 2008 - 15:02

Truly terrifying. Good one ;-)

Silver Spun Sand | September 18, 2008 - 11:09

Spinechilling and a highly effective ending.

Tina

sunshine | September 18, 2008 - 18:34

eeek -very good; tight. Margot

MistakenMagic | September 20, 2008 - 20:24

The last two lines are out of this world! As is the entire poem - another terrific piece :)

Caldwell | October 8, 2008 - 21:15

Ooh, cosy