Slip skin (17th September, 2008, 1.15pm)
I sharpen the carving knife,
poise it above another life,
make the first incision,
and with the first blood drawn
comes the knowledge that
I have made the right decision;
a mask for the masquerade,
new clothes for the parade,
and who I was shall be invisible
as I model my new vision.
Peel back the requisite layers;
undress the pair of us inch by inch;
one quiet, dumb, limp; one wincing;
then the moment of revelation
in which I become hidden;
slip skin on like a glove
and hide in the softness
of somebody else’s prison.

Comments
Nathan Bednarek | September 17, 2008 - 15:02
Truly terrifying. Good one ;-)
Silver Spun Sand | September 18, 2008 - 11:09
Spinechilling and a highly effective ending.
Tina
sunshine | September 18, 2008 - 18:34
eeek -very good; tight. Margot
MistakenMagic | September 20, 2008 - 20:24
The last two lines are out of this world! As is the entire poem - another terrific piece :)
Caldwell | October 8, 2008 - 21:15
Ooh, cosy