Saturday Sonnet: To the Nephew


from the ABC set Sonnets

I seldom write of death. I’m still too young;
My pen has yet to spell of lives dispelled,
And when I walked my way, the hand I held
Was not the shadow I’ll hold down the long
And final path. But death paid me a visit
In a dream, it stood by me before
The sea to take a picture, and it bore
A shape as my grandfather’s once. Is it
Coincidence death came as an old man,
The same old man in every picture past
Which hold my fathers in a folder’s span?
Death spoke to me, and now I know I’m cast
As an old man on seas your eyes will scan.
Then I’ll be death. Your dream will be my mast.

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Comments

jennifer | March 7, 2010 - 14:18

Love the last line, great stuff!

J x

Nathan Bednarek | March 7, 2010 - 21:44

Brilliant! I agree with Jennifer, the last line is just perfect- a spit'n'polish finish ;-)

Well done.

Nathan.