Because the storm of love is raging
On a chest too young to claim
It has weathered storm and rain
I build a house and, in it, staging
Pantomimes of rigid bliss,
I tell myself and tell myself
I bite no suffering, till the wealth
Of words I speak fills the abyss.
But my mind comes falling while
The House of Lies has got no roof,
I speak the words which break the dial
In the equinox of truth,
I am the fist that bleeds denial
Through the fingers of my youth.

Comments
jennifer | October 24, 2008 - 10:16
Powerful writing, imagery superb,
especially effective and striking, the ultimate couplet:
'I am the fist that bleeds denial
Through the fingers of my youth.'
Stunning work.
tamara (not verified) | October 25, 2008 - 08:24
This Is very powerful,line for line.It is an excellent piece of work.