Thursday Sonnet: Storm


from the ABC set Sonnets

Because the storm of love is raging
On a chest too young to claim
It has weathered storm and rain
I build a house and, in it, staging
Pantomimes of rigid bliss,
I tell myself and tell myself
I bite no suffering, till the wealth
Of words I speak fills the abyss.
But my mind comes falling while
The House of Lies has got no roof,
I speak the words which break the dial
In the equinox of truth,
I am the fist that bleeds denial
Through the fingers of my youth.

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Comments

jennifer | October 24, 2008 - 10:16

Powerful writing, imagery superb,

especially effective and striking, the ultimate couplet:

'I am the fist that bleeds denial
Through the fingers of my youth.'

Stunning work.

tamara (not verified) | October 25, 2008 - 08:24

This Is very powerful,line for line.It is an excellent piece of work.