(A play for voices)
Sound of a TV, volume very low, and soft steady rain against a window. Both noises remain constant until indicated otherwise, whether or not the characters are speaking. The TV is showing an old melodrama, with frequent breaks for adverts. Occasional gusts of wind blow the rain harder against the glass.
Jack I can't feel anything Mum.
Mum Time for bed Jack.
Jack I can't feel.
Mum Teddy's waiting for you. Ted in bed. And Jack in bed. Jack in bed.
Jack If I go to bed I won't come back.
Mum What a thing to say. Where are you going that you won't come back?
Jack I can go anywhere but I can't come back.
Mum Who's got you talking in riddles Jack? Is it Mister Martin? Has Mister Martin been telling you riddles?
Jack Mister Martin doesn't talk riddles. Mr Martin's dead. He's a ghost.
Mum He was alive and well this morning. You told me so yourself.
Jack (laughing) Mister Martin…
Mum What's so funny Jack? Share the joke.
Jack (frightened) Mister Martin…
Mum That's a terrible face Jack. If the wind changes you'll stay like that.
Mum Anyway I thought Mister Martin gave you a present. This morning you said he gave you a present. Why don't you tell me what he gave you and come along to bed.
Long pause, during which a break for adverts begins on the TV. The volume is slightly higher than the movie, and the indicated words can just be made out.
Mum What did he give you Jack?
Advert (singing) Wherever you're going…
Jack He gave me everything.
Mum He gave you everything? Well that's quite a gift.
Advert (singing) Wherever you are…
Mum Did he wrap it up for you? Tie a little ribbon round it like they do in the shop?
Jack He gave me everything.
Advert Do it right, do it RealBrite!
Mum Open your eyes Jack. It's time for bed.
Mum (becoming exasperated) Open your eyes Jack. It's time for bed.
The adverts end and the old movie resumes. The TV becomes suddenly louder, so that Mum's berating of Jack is as drowned out as the adverts were before.
Female voice No-one has ever loved like us… no-one.
Male voice Do not talk of love. It is deadly to speak of it. If we allow ourselves for one instant to believe that love can save us we will be destroyed. Destroyed, do you hear?
Mum …had enough. Do you under…
Female voice I will talk of love and you know what? I don't care if it does destroy us. I don't care if it destroys the whole world.
Male voice When your eyes fill with fire like that, you are the most beautiful creature I have ever seen.
Mum …god's sake Jack!
Female voice Oh Randolph.
Male voice Come to me Delilah. Be mine in heaven tonight and we'll damn tomorrow, damn all our tomorrows to hell!
The sound of swelling music fades, until the movie is back at its original volume. Rain taps steadily against the glass.
Dad (shouting from another room) Have you seen my book anywhere? I can't find my book.
Pause
Dad Found it!
Mum sighs.
Mum (softer voice) Did he give you castles?
Jack They floated in the sky.
Mum Did he give you stars?
Jack They dropped in the sea. They hissed and frothed and steam came up and light swooshed out like milk in coffee.
Mum Did he give you words?
Jack They gunned the walls so the white flaked off and you could see the bricks and the bulletholes inside and the cracks spreading out like spiders. They smashed the windows. One by one, all the windows in the house and the bottles on the shelves. They shot the stones in the dead field. They blasted the stones so you could see the white in the shiny black and the powder in the stone.
Mum Did he hug you?
Jack It was so warm. I've never felt so warm.
Mum Did he touch you?
Jack I can touch anything.
Pause.
Jack (anxious) I can't feel anything.
Mum You mustn't let him touch you Jack. Never let him touch you.
Pause
Mum Where did he take you?
Jack Mountains, cities, oceans, flames.
Mum Where did you go?
Pause.
Mum Where did you go Jack?
Pause.
Mum Did he show you pictures?
Jack They burned my eyes. My eyes went on fire and my eyes dripped out and my eyebrows went black and everything… everything grey.
Mum Did he tell you lies?
Jack They dropped from the trees and wriggled on the ground. They crawled up my back and down my legs. They bit me all over. They bit me all over.
Mum Did he tell you lies?
Jack They came down like rain but they were fire. They were yellow orange white red, all fire colours, and when they were gone everything was grey.
Mum Did he tell you lies?
Jack They fell on the grass and flowers popped up, and they fell on the stream and the sun sparkled on top of the stream. People came to dig the grass but the roots grew too quick and the holes filled with trees and the people went away and the grass and the flowers and the stream were all mine.
Long pause. The wind intensifies, slapping at the window.
Mum Open your eyes Jack. It's time for bed.
Jack Mister Martin…
Mum Mister Martin's gone Jack. Open your eyes.
The rain stops, a cock crows, birds begin to sing.
Mum (screaming) Open your eyes! Open your eyes!
Frightened noise from Jack. The sofa creaks and his feet thump on the carpet.
Jack (tearful) I can't see you Mum.
Mum Of course you can see me. Give me your hand.
Two pairs of footsteps cross the floor. Birds chirp outside.
Jack (on other side of room) I can't see.
The door clicks shut and muffled footsteps climb the stairs. Barely audible, another door opens upstairs. A few seconds later the movie stops and an ad break comes on, violently loud.
Female voice Break the chickenbones that spike your fright. The sour crotches you despise. You will be rewarded! You will be rewarded!
Male voice The spark of choice rises for you. The palace awaits. The pleasure awaits. Every day is another day wasted. Come in. Do not wait. Do not be deceived.
Both voices You have no-one but yourself to curse! You are the forger of the sword! Your destiny will not forgive your weakness! Love lies gleaming at your feet! You must have it! You must have it! You must have it!

Comments
jeanross | January 25, 2008 - 11:29
what a really well written story. I was getting worried where it was going. I am still not sure I will read it again.
Sooz006 | January 26, 2008 - 15:26
This literally putb me on edge. I found it sinister and disturbing. Fantastic ... apart from the end. Sorry I'm thick. When his mother scramed at him to open his eyes, I thought he'd gone and 'couldn't come back ... but that wasn't the case. I want to know what's happened to Jack, is he blind or life? Will Mister Martin be back? With a less ambiguous ending this would well well deserving of a cherry. Cracking read.