Am I asking too much of you
My autumn wish moon? Moooon
Ahahah answering all my own
que-estions out here alone!
If I can't hear, answer you
is because I am calling own
name, trying to find myself
lost my mind and my memorys
maybe they are all we have!
I can't hear poems you read
or promises you said asleep
so I cant blame you, if you
can't keep them, I was glad
you made them atall o moon!
Thankyou for making believe
how true my wishes could be
Comments
skinner_jennifer | October 21, 2010 - 13:25
What beautiful words, tell the Autumn moon your wishes. Lovely poem Kahdai.
Jenny.
Kahdai | October 21, 2010 - 13:44
Thankyou very much Jenny for reading and commenting. Am very glad you like it! K x
Highhat | October 21, 2010 - 14:04
I thought it was nice too
;)Pia
skinner_jennifer | October 21, 2010 - 16:57
Hi Kahdai,
I have just been looking at the moon from my kitchen
window, I immediately thought of your poem, just
wonderful.
Jenny.
fatboy74 | October 21, 2010 - 23:02
Like Jenny just put the dog to bed and seen your giant moooon above the trees outside. This feels like a song to the moon. Well done :-)
Kahdai | October 22, 2010 - 11:58
Ooh thankyou all! It was like to the moon, out on the bike at night for the first time in ages, song in my head :) K