Cherries (I.P.)

At fist I thought to myself
if I could get these valued
fruit on my wooden writings
they would make them better
they remain out of my reach
except for two poems I felt
were not a word to my best.

When ii mispelt punctuation
or scrambled proper english
it made no difference since
my heart was in it, meaning
I cannot think word for one
I just like it whyever I do
and it would seem so do you

It would make no difference
not anymore except another,
read and maybe comment now,
I dont mind, go un-noticed,
except by you,! my regulars
few yet reliable and think,
a comment just for me, well
is better than get a cherry

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Comments

skinner_jennifer | November 25, 2010 - 17:22

Hi Kahdai,

I love your work and love the way you express yourself in words.

Jenny.

Kahdai | November 25, 2010 - 17:33

Thank yoou Jenny dear :) K x

Highhat | November 25, 2010 - 18:02

There is a good rythmn to this sweet little poem Kahdai. Well done and thank you for the fine words
;)Pia

Kahdai | November 25, 2010 - 18:52

Glad you knew ;) K

BeKsta | December 2, 2010 - 23:08

very honest, I was afraid I was a bit to honest in my writings, but now I have a companion :) Look forward to reading more of your stuff

Kahdai | December 4, 2010 - 09:06

Thanks BeKsta its the easiest way to write for me ;) K x