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Flying through the air (I.P.)

Posted by Kahdai on December 24, 2010 - 21:05

You shouldn't
go out
on the ice-slushed roads
on two wheels
with an engine in the middle,
its dangerous
and too much fun.
You might worry
for
your mental state
if you laugh
when you know
you are going to go
flying through the air!

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MistakenMagic | December 24, 2010 - 22:54

A lovely little ditty, Kahdai! But the roads really are treacherous this time of year - but I love your poem's attitudes, you never know whether to laugh or cry!

Magic xxx

Kahdai | December 24, 2010 - 23:11

haha & sounds like you dont know whether to agree or dissaprove ;) xxx

Silver Spun Sand | December 25, 2010 - 13:17

This really made me smile, Kahdai. Many a true word is spoken in a poem;-)

T ;-)x

Kahdai | December 27, 2010 - 21:10

Thanks Tina! My poetry is mostly honesty ;) x

Highhat | January 1, 2011 - 17:03

Yes you have to beware of the icey roads. Nice little poem
;)Pia

Kahdai | January 3, 2011 - 19:25

thanks Pia, it was fun though :D