You know, how you dont have to see
someones face to know they mean it
That's how it is with a song to me
I know a true voice when I hear it
In your head write words carefully
conjure up volume from your lungs,
smile but in your voice tears know
So maybe still may see the colours
sometimes you even feel the warmth
but with nothing left to sing for,
it may feel as if you could give up
as your heart doesn't care anymore
you only sing a sad song, heart is
where the tune you sing is created
(large number) of notes float away
if a bubble lands on your sholder
think it could contain my melody
a cloud over the moon lights up
we ice skate on saturns rings
let our wings unfurl again
and our loud heart sings.
Comments
skinner_jennifer | October 12, 2010 - 11:19
Oh Kahdai,
you write the most beautiful poems, I love, we skate
on saturn rings, let our wings unfurl again and our
loud heart sings. It's so magical. Thankyou.
Jenny.
Silver Spun Sand | October 12, 2010 - 11:32
The sentiment behind this is beautiful, Kahdai. You have some wonderful imagery here, especially in the last stanza:-
"...if a bubble lands on your sholder
think it could contain my melody
a cloud over the moon lights up
we ice skate on saturns rings..."
Tina;-)
Kahdai | October 12, 2010 - 11:52
Wow & most beautiful comment Jenny! Magical,? really well I love that! Thankyou both! Tina I might well make it into image sometime too :)
sentiment is... complicated haha maybe it can become my IP K x x
skinner_jennifer | October 12, 2010 - 12:40
Hi Kahdai,
You know, the reason I like your poetry, is because
it comes right from the heart. That is a rare thing
today. Since I have been on ABC Tales, I have
discovered that there are many people that
are able to write from the heart, I never realised
until I came on here.
Jenny.
Highhat | October 12, 2010 - 12:56
Kahdai I really think this is most beautiful- divine actually to coin an appropriate word. I'd wish for you that your grammar was just an inkling better- maybe a cherry? I hope so
cheers
;)pia
Highhat | October 12, 2010 - 13:00
Really there's nothing wrong with this one at all- sorry about my last comment. I think you have done it very well indeed. (as if is in 2 words I think) You have completely your own style- that is fabulous. Very unique.
;)pia
Kahdai | October 12, 2010 - 13:05
Thankyou again Jenny, writing from the heart I hope gives other people some of the emotion when they read it. Pia, maybe I would get cherries on other old poems if I knew where my grammar was, I know I always write asif and dont notice when I check it! thanks anyway ;) K x
fatboy74 | October 12, 2010 - 13:50
Very much enjoyed and wonderful last stanza. :-)
Kahdai | October 12, 2010 - 14:54
Thankyou very much fatboy74 :) ! K
shoe | October 12, 2010 - 17:02
This wonderful, one of your best Kahdai, i just cannot choose a favourite bit, I love it all.
Kahdai | October 13, 2010 - 12:34
Ooh wow thankyou shoe x!