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Hope enough (song)

Posted by Kahdai on March 19, 2011 - 12:21
from the ABC set Me, you & my world

You have no hope left in you
holding on made you run out,
yet I've only to look at you
and I don't need the sun out

I've got hope enough
for the both of us
and I'll hope for you,
one day to,
have enough hope to
wish on my stars too
and believe it can come true.

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Comments

Silver Spun Sand | March 19, 2011 - 12:35

There is a deceptive simplicity to this one, Kahdai, only adding to its appeal. I liked it, very much.

Tina x

Kahdai | March 19, 2011 - 13:37

Thanks Tina, you're right ;) x K

SundaysChild | March 19, 2011 - 16:27

I like this too.

skinner_jennifer | March 19, 2011 - 17:07

A really beautiful poem here Kahdai, love the way
you say, you have enough hope for the both of us,
brilliant.

Jenny.

MistakenMagic | March 20, 2011 - 23:56

And I've hope for the both of you too, Kahdai! Keep up the hoping ;)

Magic xxx

Kahdai | March 21, 2011 - 12:53

^^ Thankyou SundaysChild, Jenny and Magic thanks I will have to dont I? :) xxx K