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Posted by Kahdai on July 31, 2010 - 12:51

I don't know what to write about this saint
I didn't know her atall, stranger til today
she does sound a funny character to me tho
expect I'd like her and she'ld not like me
this impossible astonishing Saint Christina.

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jennifer | July 31, 2010 - 15:14

don't and didn't need apostrophes, and names are proper nouns and should have capital letters - 'Saint Christina'.

It's a good idea to proof-read your work before posting - leave it for an hour and then come back with fresh eyes, that usually helps me!

J x

Kahdai | August 4, 2010 - 14:27

thanks J x