Lack of regret (I.P.)

What annoyed me was her lack of regret, after actions that were emotionally driven, quick words thrown away, times gone, chances she missed, people died who she not missed. If I ever once asked her how, she just shrugged that she couldnt go back in time. I could not understand it. Croetine came in door slamming and wailing one morning, so I asked the cat what she was crying hysterically about and he explained well to me, as he usually has to 'Because of her background as a nude model, Croetine was forced to spend an extraordinarily long time as a novice before being allowed to proceed to final vows.' what vows I asked, yet she had grabbed my jacket and gone without explaining.

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Comments

Highhat | November 17, 2010 - 08:43

Good with a short story from your hand Kahdai
well done on the IP
;)Pia

MistakenMagic | November 17, 2010 - 18:27

Love the idea of talking to the cat, Kahdai! Gives the piece quite an Alice in Wonderland 'Cheshire Cat' feel :)

Magic xxx

shoe | November 17, 2010 - 19:36

An interesting short story, I love the way the cat just pops up nonchalantly, Hmmm.. I think you could write more stuff like this or expand on this one. it's very good.

Kahdai | November 18, 2010 - 12:36

Thankyou all am glad I managed to write anything for this IP I was a little stuck. Magic, thanks I like that pink cat :) And shoe, well I did write more only I was just trying to think of something for the IP and it was getting silly K