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Longing sickness

Posted by Kahdai on April 11, 2011 - 13:50
from the ABC set Me, you & my world

Can't leave you
you know I feel
belong between
homeland hills,
miles of green
and feeling safe
yet am fading ill.

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skinner_jennifer | April 11, 2011 - 14:54

Hi Kahdai,

this is so sad, I can feel a lot of emotion of sickness and talking of leaving.

Hope you are well.

Take care,

Jenny.

Highhat | April 11, 2011 - 18:19

Were you feeling homesick? Such a good little poem Kahdai.
;)Pia

shoe | April 12, 2011 - 17:53

I agree, I enjoyed this little poem, seems to say a lot with few words.

Kahdai | April 14, 2011 - 14:49

Aaw :) well thankyou all! Dont worry am alright It's just I hate being in the city I dont feel safe and I have only just got out to the countryside for a weekend and it made me more homesick Another illness noone can see K xxx