Luna

Delicate and lovely.

Liked, Kahdai...very much;-)

Just popped back to say, you may like to change an it's, or an it is, to the seventh line:-

I.e.'It's no surprise.'

Apart from that, as I said, smashing!

Tina

very sweet x

Hi Kahdai,

the moon is so special to me and I love the way
you describe her here in this poem, staying up
with the stars all night, like the mother staying
up watching over her children. So beautiful Kahdai,
I think you excelled yourself with this poem.

Thankyou for a beautiful read.

Jenny.

^^ yay thankyou all very much,! Tina I will change it thanks and Jenny I did have that idea in mind :) K xxx

Yes the moon is a very strong part of nature- beeming down during the night. Nice poem
;)Pia