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Missing(I.P.)

Posted by Kahdai on April 14, 2011 - 16:06

I want to stay here
forever
and not move
wishing
all I can
that you could
too.

I cant leave you
any more than I want to
desiderate
I do not use
Is someone missing me
Is there someone missing
something missing from me?

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Comments

skinner_jennifer | April 14, 2011 - 16:26

Another beautiful poem of longing and needing, a
wonderful description of wanting to stay in a special
place. Very nice poem Kahdai.

Jenny.

Silver Spun Sand | April 14, 2011 - 17:56

This is lovely kahdai. Perfect for the IP;-)xxT

Highhat | April 14, 2011 - 18:19

Yeah a perfect IP Kahdai- well done to say the least
;)PIa

Lem | April 14, 2011 - 21:16

Makes me think of Evanescence :} Love the first stanza especially. x

Kahdai | April 17, 2011 - 21:38

thankyou all!
right jenny it is a bit like my last oops!
am glad i got the word meaning right tina
thanks pia and lem :)
xxxx