November New-year (I.P.)

Darkest before the dawn
my sleeping october sky
losing clouds gaining a
one wishing star for me
tonight atleast, I have
to make myself sleep to
wake up to my new year.

The dew settles asleep,
a foxes paws out creep,
and the grey sky paints
with just a little blue
in hopes mine come true
this november new year,
I will wake better new.

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Comments

skinner_jennifer | June 28, 2011 - 16:09

What a great poem of hope, I love it Kahdai.

Jenny.

Kahdai | July 5, 2011 - 12:00

thankyou jenny well see in november

BeKsta | July 6, 2011 - 23:47

I like this to, for some reason 'a foxes paw creeps out' just completes the picture for me :)

Kahdai | July 7, 2011 - 10:55

Thanks Beeme, that's the first image that came to me when read the I.P., acting secret and magical K