Old like me?

If your old like me
maybe somtimes you try
to put the kettle
in the fridge
and the milk
in its place

Maybe, your knees creak and moan if
you try to be getting up like usual

Maybe you like to travel about
yet need mor stops than yusto?

Maybe people call you old fashioned
because of all the things you like?

Meybi you check the doors locked or
look behind the curtains more often

MeB you feel so tired, you could
give up, then see something that
makes you smile and is, worth it
that you feel like being, doing.

Dancing, singing, painting life.
I am not really old atall am I?

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Comments

MistakenMagic | September 12, 2010 - 10:01

'maybe somtimes you try
to put the kettle
in the fridge
and the milk
in its place

Maybe, your knees creak and moan if
you try to be getting up like usual'

- these lines really made me laugh, Kahdai. And the whole poem gave me a very warm feeling, well done! :)

Magic xxx

skinner_jennifer | September 12, 2010 - 11:06

Hi Kahdai,
I know the feeling well.
Good poem.
Jenny.

Kahdai | September 12, 2010 - 19:28

Welcome very Magic! I wanted it to start off kindof funny. xx
Jenny, glad it worked then ;) , thanks for reading K