Painting rainbow reflection

drafting...

Hi Kahdai,
I love how you use your imagination to change
colours. My favourite lines are, Now my blood is
churning like breaker waves of my old shore and
feelings rushing personality, changing colours with
thought. Brilliant.

Jenny. x

Beautiful imagery and very emotive, I love the lines Jenny has quoted too, don't change it too much, it's lovely already.

dont worry its not for changing, just had to stop writing it part way through :/ the colours change is not mood its actually the whole personality! Thankyous both for reading already though :) K xx

This is a great poem about being an poet/artist. I like the fact that its full of movement and energy which really conveys well, I think both, emmotion and struggle.

I agree with jenny about the first two lines

Now my blood is churning like
breaker waves of my old shore

I also like

the centre of my life capsize
throw me out and fill me with
self hate, regret desperation

thanks wellwisher :)