Put down (I.P. II )

Posted by Kahdai on November 29, 2010 - 18:53

Put down the gun
you dont want to
even hurt anyone
and it can kill.

Put down the rope
you know dont yet
dont give up hope
for someone else.

Put down the knife
please, give to me
more time of a life
and selfish wants to
keep you here longer.

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Comments

A good take on the IP Kahdai- well done
;)Pia

Thanks Pia :)

Hi Kahdai,

A great poem for the IP. It's all my sentiments,
everything I believe in. Violence never solves
anything.

Jenny.

Fine sentiments, Kahdai;-) Well done!

Tina x

Thankyou Jenny and Tina,! glad you like K x

Yes. I agree with all the others who've commented. A good use of IP. I also thought it would make a good song; an anti-violence song.

Thanks well-wisher, yeh it had a sliight tune in my head :) x K

Great poem Kahdai, great message!

Beeme xx

Thanks Beeme xx