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Posted by Kahdai on September 29, 2010 - 19:51

Thanks to skinner_jennifer & Pia (Highhat)

I whisper to the wind
songs under my breath
words for me remember
all the orange leaves
dance down from trees
twirling persuasively
I spin looking upward
then laughing and run
home to write my poem
thank for inspiration
helps put me in words.

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Comments

skinner_jennifer | September 29, 2010 - 19:59

How lovely Kahdai,
you brought a tear to my eye, with this poem, it's so
beautiful. Thankyou.
Jenny.

Kahdai | September 29, 2010 - 21:05

Aaw,! well thanks to you! :) K x

MistakenMagic | September 29, 2010 - 21:11

Love the title, Kahdai. A beautiful poem too - full of joie de vivre ;)

Magic xxx

MistakenMagic | September 29, 2010 - 21:28

Translated from the French it literally means 'the joy of life' - used to describe something that has a lot of spirit and love ;)

Magic xxx

Kahdai | September 29, 2010 - 21:28

I think thats nice, title is Pia s comment on Jennys poem October magic. Oh & what 'joie de vivre' mean? :) xxx K

insertponceyfre... | September 29, 2010 - 21:57

it is lovely, and Magic is right about the joie de vivre too

Highhat | September 30, 2010 - 12:01

That's the spirit Kahdai- lots of love for nature- beautiful words- and thanks for being inspired by me as well- great- glad to know I could do it ;D
pia

Kahdai | October 1, 2010 - 10:21

Thanks everyone thats great (now I know it was french!) Pia its a lovely word! Kahdai xx