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Posted by Kahdai on March 21, 2011 - 13:05
from the ABC set Me, you & my world

They made me paint
yet let me choose
I painted it
look at you
my own twist
like an owl
every blade
a different shade
created a bold beast
unique stripes
camoflaged he was not
to blue
sorry I am not
I never wanted to paint you yet
became one of my very best, ever
they made me give you away I regret

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Silver Spun Sand | March 21, 2011 - 13:32

Hi there, Kahdai. This 'grew some' since I first read it;-)

In the last but one line, it would be best if you said, 'became one of my very best, ever'.

You painted quite some picture in my head, I must say;-)

Tina x

Kahdai | March 21, 2011 - 13:57

Yes thank you very much Tina am glad x :)

skinner_jennifer | March 21, 2011 - 15:48

Hi Kahdai,

I liked the idea that you were painting what you
were seeing in your imagination, that is how art
should be seen.

Beautifully done Kahdai.

Jenny.

Highhat | March 21, 2011 - 19:00

I agree with Jenny Kahdai- well done
;)Pia

Kahdai | March 22, 2011 - 15:03

Thanks Pia & Jenny :) I dont think I could ever be able to paint what I see through my eyes anyway! K

Highhat | March 22, 2011 - 17:14

It' so good that you can paint in words Kahdai- well done ;)Pia

Kahdai | April 1, 2011 - 16:18

thanks :)