Repeat (I.P.)

I put a song on repeat
it not especially good
just a rythem and beat
a song changed my mind

Like the song, even if
you know it's not good
it may cheer us up for
sorrow you know should
a song changed my mind

You heard it too again
a song that reminds us
of a better time hopes
to give us strenght or
faith, a voice to sing
a song changed my mind

Like when I was so mad
after shouted me quiet
ran from my life alone
after lied in cold mud
sobbing let me hear it
over the lonely fields
a song changed my mind

May you remember a one
song you sang along to
when your heart was in
in words meant for you
you can always know it
sing it and believe it
a song changed my mind
let your song in again

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Comments

MistakenMagic | November 30, 2010 - 10:30

'Like when I was so mad
after shouted me quiet
ran from my life alone
after lied in cold mud
sobbing let me hear it
over the lonely fields
a song changed my mind'

- love these lines, Kahdai. So atmospheric! Well done :)

Magic xxx

skinner_jennifer | November 30, 2010 - 11:07

There are alot of songs that I can quite honestly
say changed me.

You speak your words so well Kahdai, speaking from
the heart.

Thanks for the read.

Jenny.

seashore | December 1, 2010 - 09:58

Yes I can really feel this one.

Kahdai | December 2, 2010 - 20:52

Thankyou Magic dear must be good if the atmosphere got you, Jenny glad you have special songs too, seashore short comment means a lot, thankyou all xxx K

BeKsta | December 2, 2010 - 23:13

very honest again, music can be so special sometimes, youve captured its importance espcially in the lines quoted by mistaken magic

Kahdai | December 4, 2010 - 09:08

Yes I think its as important to lots of people like me, thankyou again for reading BeKsta :) x K