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Saw the stars go out (song)

Posted by Kahdai on November 15, 2010 - 13:49
from the ABC set Me, you & my world

When woke up this morning
sky still dark yet ii see
stars flicker off the sun
from over & under the sea
a frost lit up everything
sun doesnt warm me anyway
though you hours ago left
your side dreaming of you
and I am climbing back in

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Highhat | November 15, 2010 - 19:10

This is a lovely love poem Kahdai.
;)Pia

skinner_jennifer | November 16, 2010 - 08:59

I totally agree with Pia, the stars flicker off the
sun, simply beautiful.

Jenny.

Kahdai | November 16, 2010 - 20:05

Thanks both ^^ have anyone or you ever seen that? K x

Highhat | November 16, 2010 - 20:52

No I can't recall having seen that but you give a very good picture
Pia ;)

Kahdai | November 16, 2010 - 21:14

thanks Pia dear :)

skinner_jennifer | November 16, 2010 - 22:19

No I have never seen the stars flicker off the sun
either, but it sounds wonderful.

Jenny.

Kahdai | November 18, 2010 - 12:15

Well, looks like it makes the stars flicker and go out, thats what I think anyway, and then the sky gets lighter K