Share my dream

I know you dont think that way
waht with the loss of faith
I just wanted you to try
to dream, to maybe
share my dream
of a future,
and of hope.

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Comments

jacques07 | December 13, 2010 - 12:27

Encouraging words Kahdai. A good poem about hope and the future...

Kahdai | December 13, 2010 - 12:52

Thankyou!

skinner_jennifer | December 13, 2010 - 12:52

Hi Kahdai,

I would love to share your dream of future hope, it
sounds good.

Thankyou for the read.

Jenny.

Kahdai | December 13, 2010 - 12:54

Thanks Jenny, I hope you do! x K

shoe | December 14, 2010 - 12:13

Short but very effective, nice one.

Kahdai | December 20, 2010 - 18:12

thanx shoe x

Highhat | January 1, 2011 - 17:02

just catching up Kahdai- a short and fine poem about your dream.
;)Pia

Kahdai | January 3, 2011 - 19:23

thankyou Pia and for including me in your catch up ;) K