In your eyes,
I see a-ll of you
& the meaning
of your songs
is not in the words,
It's in your eyes
& the te-ars in your voice.
In your eyes,
I see a-ll of you
& the meaning
of your songs
is not in the words,
It's in your eyes
& the te-ars in your voice.
Comments
Highhat | September 7, 2010 - 08:13
Sometimes- not 2 ii's Kahdai- watch your proof reading!! Otherwise a lovely poem- so sad .
pia
MistakenMagic | September 7, 2010 - 19:25
Short but oh-so beautiful, kahdai! Just a little typo - 'It's' instead of 'its' in the final stanza. :)
Magic xxx
Kahdai | September 8, 2010 - 20:24
Thankyou both very much! Pia, one i is ee sound to me if read it out loud! I think meybe I'v managed a sad and beautiful poem! :D K xxx
Highhat | September 9, 2010 - 13:39
Yes you did Kahdai a very beautiful poem ;)
pia
Kahdai | September 9, 2010 - 14:47
^^
Kahdai | September 10, 2010 - 14:07
If anyone wanto see the painting:
http://browse.deviantart.com/?order=5&q=tears#/d2yf4ao
Kahdai
Highhat | September 10, 2010 - 16:41
lovely painting Kahdai ;)
pia xx
Kahdai | September 10, 2010 - 21:24
thanks its one of my rare lefty ones :) K xx