Sometimes its a sad song

In your eyes,
I see a-ll of you

& the meaning
of your songs
is not in the words,

It's in your eyes
& the te-ars in your voice.

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Comments

Highhat | September 7, 2010 - 08:13

Sometimes- not 2 ii's Kahdai- watch your proof reading!! Otherwise a lovely poem- so sad .
pia

MistakenMagic | September 7, 2010 - 19:25

Short but oh-so beautiful, kahdai! Just a little typo - 'It's' instead of 'its' in the final stanza. :)

Magic xxx

Kahdai | September 8, 2010 - 20:24

Thankyou both very much! Pia, one i is ee sound to me if read it out loud! I think meybe I'v managed a sad and beautiful poem! :D K xxx

Highhat | September 9, 2010 - 13:39

Yes you did Kahdai a very beautiful poem ;)
pia

Kahdai | September 9, 2010 - 14:47

^^

Kahdai | September 10, 2010 - 14:07

If anyone wanto see the painting:

http://browse.deviantart.com/?order=5&q=tears#/d2yf4ao

Kahdai

Highhat | September 10, 2010 - 16:41

lovely painting Kahdai ;)
pia xx

Kahdai | September 10, 2010 - 21:24

thanks its one of my rare lefty ones :) K xx